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xD You think that the effects on Shiori are odd ? ^^' Could you tell me why, then I can improve the way I put effects

Wow, that was quick......ok.....let me see....*brings up the picture again*
Where should i start.....hmmmmm, okay.

Text - Her last name comes first, then her first name
Background - Good, however, the swirls might be fine but the sky is black? I think that some leaves would be nice, it's fall after all.
Swirls around Shiori - It feels like her being a divine being. Isn't Ayu that?
Halo - Colour is fine for autumn but i think it looked differently. It's good though, just commenting on that. (I thought it looked less transparent)

Shiori's back - This is what i believe to look funny/odd. Although the swirls are okay, i think that the white part behind her back makes her look like an angel. Plus, the brightness makes me look away (to the right of the wallpaper) and gives a slight headache. It's a bit too vibrant, her back.

Overall feel - Overall, i feel that the background and Shiori don't blend completely because either:
a) Shiori is too colourful (her back makes the whiteness really sharp) because i think autumn is like spring with soft colours (Shiori is pretty sharp too)
b) The background is too dull, it has enough colour but more could be added to match Shiori's sharpness.

So i believe that the white part (maybe the halo) should be less sharp and the background with more colour (anime-ish?) to match completely.

I hope i didn't offend you, as i provided my best explaination i could.

Regards, Kyuoto

Thanks for the comment. And the wallpaper of For Richer or Poorer is my property. Over there I'm Kimchi and here I'm Kimchiian. I hope you won't get mixed up. ^_^;